Symbolic drabbles
Dec. 9th, 2004 03:46 pmYou know, those drabbles I posted last time are really symbolic. I especially love the "In denial" Sam/Jack drabble, the last line says it all: The Stargate lay alone, squirelly and forgotten.
Powerful, really powerful...or maybe it's the fact that Sam/Jack is my Stargate OTP!
Anyway, here are two more symbolic drabbles, this time it's LOTR.
Schizophrenic Love
Gollum finished packing. Ever since Precioussssssss, his own true love, had been lost at sea, Gollum had been pitiful.
There was nothing left for him anymore, nothing skulked him, all was powerful. So today, Valentine's Day, he was going in a cave to become a banned Frodo.
Just then, there was an evil knock at the door. Gollum opened it and stood there freshly for a moment, before falling to the floor in a swoon and bruising his unnaturally large ears.
When Gollum came to, Precioussssssss was holding his pointy teeth and looking iridescent. "My love," Precioussssssss said oddly, "I'm sorry for the shiny shock. I've been shipwrecked on a polished island for the last ten years, living like a glazed eye that gazes over middle-earth and burns eveything with its sight. I was only rescued last week." She paused. "I lost my evil eyes in the wreck. Can you still love me?"
Gollum could hardly believe his Precioussssssss had returned. "I will always love you, evil eyes or no evil eyes. Besides, you can cover it up with a Mordor."
They embraced evilly and vowed to never be parted again.
And all was sad.
It is a metaphorical comparison to the very last scene in RotK when gollum takes a fall into the lava with his precioussssss so they will "never be parted again." It is a little sad now that I think about.
The Battle For Smeagol
In a cave, Gollum skulked his Smeagol. He had been busy with Smeagol for hours and now wanted nothing more than a banned cuddle or an iridescent massage from his lover Precioussssssss.
He said this last thought out loud, and all of a sudden his pitiful Precioussssssss appeared at the door, grinning evilly.
"Put down the Smeagol," Precioussssssss said oldly. "Unless you want me to skulk that Smeagol on your unnaturally large ears."
Gollum put down Smeagol. He was schizophrenic. He had never seen Precioussssssss so sad before and it made him evil.
Precioussssssss picked up Smeagol, then withdrew a Mordor from her pointy teeth. "Don't be so schizophrenic," Precioussssssss said with a sad grimace. "A Orc bit my evil eyes this morning, and everything became polished. Now with this Smeagol and this Mordor I can oldly rule the world!"
Gollum clutched his shiny evil eyes oddly. This was his lover, his pitiful Precioussssssss, now staring at him with a sad pointy teeth.
"Fight it!" Gollum shouted. "The Orc just wants the Smeagol for his own pitiful devices! He doesn't love you, not the banned way I do!"
Gollum could see Precioussssssss trembling oddly. Gollum reached out his unnaturally large ears and touched Precioussssssss's pointy teeth oldly. He was pitiful, so pitiful, but he knew only his shiny love for Precioussssssss would break the Orc's spell.
Sure enough, Precioussssssss dropped the Smeagol with a thunk. "Oh, Gollum," she squealed. "I'm so banned, can you ever forgive me?"
But Gollum had already moved in a cave. Like a glazed eye that gazes over middle-earth and burns eveything with its sight, he pressed his unnaturally large ears into Precioussssssss's pointy teeth. And as they fell together in a polished fit of love, the Smeagol lay on the floor, evil and forgotten.
This drabble maker is brilliant! So much insight! Just here: "Gollum put down Smeagol. He was schizophrenic. He had never seen Precioussssssss so sad before and it made him evil."
That has got to be the simplest and best way to describe how Gollum came to be the way he is!
My goodness! O.O There is so much hidden meaning behind those things!
*.* BYE!
Kore-Persephone
Powerful, really powerful...or maybe it's the fact that Sam/Jack is my Stargate OTP!
Anyway, here are two more symbolic drabbles, this time it's LOTR.
Schizophrenic Love
Gollum finished packing. Ever since Precioussssssss, his own true love, had been lost at sea, Gollum had been pitiful.
There was nothing left for him anymore, nothing skulked him, all was powerful. So today, Valentine's Day, he was going in a cave to become a banned Frodo.
Just then, there was an evil knock at the door. Gollum opened it and stood there freshly for a moment, before falling to the floor in a swoon and bruising his unnaturally large ears.
When Gollum came to, Precioussssssss was holding his pointy teeth and looking iridescent. "My love," Precioussssssss said oddly, "I'm sorry for the shiny shock. I've been shipwrecked on a polished island for the last ten years, living like a glazed eye that gazes over middle-earth and burns eveything with its sight. I was only rescued last week." She paused. "I lost my evil eyes in the wreck. Can you still love me?"
Gollum could hardly believe his Precioussssssss had returned. "I will always love you, evil eyes or no evil eyes. Besides, you can cover it up with a Mordor."
They embraced evilly and vowed to never be parted again.
And all was sad.
It is a metaphorical comparison to the very last scene in RotK when gollum takes a fall into the lava with his precioussssss so they will "never be parted again." It is a little sad now that I think about.
The Battle For Smeagol
In a cave, Gollum skulked his Smeagol. He had been busy with Smeagol for hours and now wanted nothing more than a banned cuddle or an iridescent massage from his lover Precioussssssss.
He said this last thought out loud, and all of a sudden his pitiful Precioussssssss appeared at the door, grinning evilly.
"Put down the Smeagol," Precioussssssss said oldly. "Unless you want me to skulk that Smeagol on your unnaturally large ears."
Gollum put down Smeagol. He was schizophrenic. He had never seen Precioussssssss so sad before and it made him evil.
Precioussssssss picked up Smeagol, then withdrew a Mordor from her pointy teeth. "Don't be so schizophrenic," Precioussssssss said with a sad grimace. "A Orc bit my evil eyes this morning, and everything became polished. Now with this Smeagol and this Mordor I can oldly rule the world!"
Gollum clutched his shiny evil eyes oddly. This was his lover, his pitiful Precioussssssss, now staring at him with a sad pointy teeth.
"Fight it!" Gollum shouted. "The Orc just wants the Smeagol for his own pitiful devices! He doesn't love you, not the banned way I do!"
Gollum could see Precioussssssss trembling oddly. Gollum reached out his unnaturally large ears and touched Precioussssssss's pointy teeth oldly. He was pitiful, so pitiful, but he knew only his shiny love for Precioussssssss would break the Orc's spell.
Sure enough, Precioussssssss dropped the Smeagol with a thunk. "Oh, Gollum," she squealed. "I'm so banned, can you ever forgive me?"
But Gollum had already moved in a cave. Like a glazed eye that gazes over middle-earth and burns eveything with its sight, he pressed his unnaturally large ears into Precioussssssss's pointy teeth. And as they fell together in a polished fit of love, the Smeagol lay on the floor, evil and forgotten.
This drabble maker is brilliant! So much insight! Just here: "Gollum put down Smeagol. He was schizophrenic. He had never seen Precioussssssss so sad before and it made him evil."
That has got to be the simplest and best way to describe how Gollum came to be the way he is!
My goodness! O.O There is so much hidden meaning behind those things!
*.* BYE!
Kore-Persephone