Poem: Of Jagged Lines

Well, I just remembered that I haven't posted this poem yet. I quite like this one. It was written for a "translation" assignment in creative writing. We were given a poem written in Polish and where told to "translate" it into what we thought it said without cheating (ie. finding the real translation).

( Here is the poem in all its Polish glory: )

( And here is what I came up with: )

( And here is what the poem really says: )

All for now, I have some things to go type up and I'm in the middle of an RPG.
Au revoir!
~Liz